我第一次寫英語作文時，犯了許多拼寫錯誤

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When I wrote the first English composition, I made many spelling mistakes.

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When I wrote the English composition first time, I made many spelling mistakes.

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I made many spelling mistakes in my first English composition

熱心網友

When I wrote the English composition first time, I made many spelling mistakes.

熱心網友

When I wrote the English composition first time, I made many spelling mistakes.

熱心網友

When I wrote the English composition, I made many spelling mistakes.