以下是我寫的英語短文,請高手看看是否有語法錯誤. Mermaid A long time ago, there was a beautiful mermaid in the sea, her name is Mary, she was clever and brave. In the sea, all the animals loved her. But because of the pollution of the sea by the human, the animals in the sea were threatened and might disappeared. So Mary went to the human world to talk with the king of the people. She said, “If you make your dumb millions stop destroying the sea, I will do anything for you.” The king agreed with her, but he wanted Mary stay on the land forever. Mary did that. She led the animals in the sea send her to the land. She faced the sea, turning to a statue watching the sea forever.

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A long time ago去掉Aher name is Mary既然都是過去式，就要統一is--wasthe human--去掉human beings So 在because后面能用嗎？去掉！of the people（So Mary went to the human world to talk with the king of the people）？wanted Mary stay on the land forever是want sb to do sth"She led the animals in the sea send her to the land——She led the sea animals which send her to the land 僅供參考~

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1。"A long time ago"="long time ago" 表達“很久以前”的固定搭配。2。"there was a beautiful。。。She was clever and brave。"="there was a beautiful mermaid in the sea。 Her name was Mary and she was clever and brave。"或者"there was abeautiful mermaid named Mary who was clever and brave in the sea。" 第一，應注意時態為過去時；第二，there be句型后不好加不同類型的并列句，最好將逗號改為句號或者運用定語從句。3。"But because of the。。。by the human"="But because of。。。the sea by human" “human”一詞前面不用加定冠詞，實際上就是不能加冠詞。以下重復者不挑出。4。"and might disappeared"="and might disappear" 在情態動詞（過去時態也一樣）后面的實意動詞應為原型。5。"She led the animals in the sea send her to the land。"="She led the sea animals which send her to the land" 原句中出現了兩個過去時的謂語動詞，主語不同，易產生混淆語義不明，可改成定語從句形式。大約有以上幾點，不對之處還請多指教。 。