在日常生活中,我們會(huì)遇到許多值得深省的問題,而實(shí)際上這個(gè)問題在日常生活中已經(jīng)有非常多的爭論,比如報(bào)紙上就說,愛情是這個(gè)世界上最美好最吸引人的東西。當(dāng)然,除了上述所考慮的幾個(gè)方面之外,還可以從很多具體的細(xì)節(jié)上討論這個(gè)問題,比如從生活 工作 娛樂學(xué)習(xí),甚至可以從人性的角度分析它深遠(yuǎn)的意義。In our daily life,we can meet some problems that require us pondering deeply,but as a matter of fact,there have already exists many(a flock of) dispute on these issues.According to the newspaper,love is the most beautiful and attractive thing on our planet.Of course,besides the upper aspects we have considered,there also be some specific details can be discussed about this,such as life,work,amusement and study,even the profound meanings can be analyzed on a perspective of human nature 跪求更加準(zhǔn)確,更加高水平的修改
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Please refer to my suggestion in upper letters, which I would like to replace those in parenthesis。 Some sentences' structure was not changed since it's ok grammartically, sounds weird though。-----------------------------------------------------------------------In our daily life,we (can meet some) WILL RUN INTO problems that require us (pondering) TO PONDER (deeply) THOROUGHLY, but as a matter of fact, there have already (exists)EXISTED (many) MUCH dispute on these issues。 SAY AS PER (According to the) newspaperS, love is the most beautiful and attractive thing on our planet。 Of course,(besides) APART FROM the (upper) ABOVE aspects we have considered,(there also be) some specific details can be discussed (about this) FOR THIS ISSUE, (such as life,work,amusement and study,even the profound meanings can be analyzed on a perspective of human nature ) E。G。, TO ANALYSE ITS PERSPECTIVE MEANING FROM OUR LIFE, OUR WORK, OUR ENTERTAINMENT, OUR STUDY, AND EVEN THE HUMAN NATURE。
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改得好,地道英語