Mr Green is a 70-year-old man.He lived in Hong Kong.Last month,he went to Australia to visit his son.He likes walking after supper,but he can't speak English.So his son was afraid that he would lose his way.One day,Mr Green got home very late.And his son asked him"Did you have any trouble?"Mr Green sniled and said"Don't worry,I have already copy the name of this street on a paper."Then he showed his son the paper."But tohis son surprised,it said"NO EXIT".有語法錯,也有詞語使用不當,哥哥姐姐們,幫個忙吧。

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語態應該一致所以lived改成livesto his son surprised改成to his son's surprise