今天下午剛作完的第2套模擬題目。請(qǐng)老師指導(dǎo)一下我的作文。非常感謝！小作文Dear Sir/Madam I'm writing to you to state my view that a chemical plant should be responsible for the water pollution in a nearby river.The present situation is not in good condition.Many chemical plants put garbage and waste liquids into nearby rivers before they are totally purified. The water becomes not clean and the fish which used to live in can be not seen. There are serveral measures which should be adopted. First,rules and laws should be designed.If chemical industries deviate these rules and laws,they should be punished heavily.Second,we should teach people to protect envioronment and tell them the harm if rivers are polluted.I think we will have a brighter and better tomorrow if we take these measures.大作文 As the set of bar charts pictures given depict,countries which their quantity of steel rank the front four positions are orderly China,Japan,American and Russion.China ranks first,accounting to 100,350,000 ton.The second position is Japan,up to 98,770,000 ton.American is lower than Japan ,which its quantity is 9,440,000 ton. Russion is the lowest in these countries,only 49,070,000 ton. It is clear that China has been the first in the world. There are many reasons to illustrate this phonomenon. In the first place, with the reform and openning-up policy being carried out,the economy in our country develops rapidly than before.This leads to increase greatly in steel. Secondly,the techonology develops at high speed which enable production to improve fastly.Finally,with the expansion of economy,the demand for steel increases greatly,which inspied steel industry product more and more steel to meet the need. All above reasons show that why the quantity of steel develop rapidly. As far as I predict,the quantity of steel in the word will decline gradually.Man will find better and cleaner energy to replace steel in order to diminish enviornment pollution.

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小作文應(yīng)該可以得到7分, THE WATER BECOMES NOT CLEAN這種否定不符合英語的習(xí)慣, 大作文寫的一般, 及格分左右, 閃光點(diǎn)少, 有明顯的錯(cuò)誤, 如:COUNTRIES WHICH THEIR QUALITY這個(gè)定語從句反映出你對(duì)定語從句還沒有掌握. 你給人的感覺是沒有什么話可以說, 內(nèi)容不夠豐富.