萬能MBA英語寫作里有一篇“ Developing ecnomy and protecting the enviroment"我基本上是一字不拉的重復了一遍。這兩天看網上的分析及范文，出入很多，惶恐惶恐，請老師幫忙看看，能拿幾分？謝謝。具體如下：Dear Sirs,I am glad to write this letter to you for developing ecnomy and protecting the enviroment during the golden week' holiday.Developing ecnomy and protecting the enviroment are two oppsite views.Usually,some people prefer to develope ecnomy.On the contrary,other people like to protect the enviroment .I think that both developing ecnomy and protecting the enviroment have their advantages.On the one hand,some people think that the only way to get rid of the poverty is well-developed ecnomy.On the other hand,others say that if our living is polluted,we could not survive on the plante.Both developing ecnomy and protecting the enviroment will contribute to our cause.But we should use them properly.If only develope economy ,we should lose our home.If only protect the enviroment ,we think that have no enough funds to improve the enviroment .So, we should develope ecnomy and protect the enviroment at the same time.Only in this way can we archive greater successes. Yours faithfully, xxx （忘了寫日期）

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這封信會讓收信部門摸不著頭腦，讓判卷老師無須看完全篇，屬于嚴重跑題。但也會給分，5分以內吧。